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Submitted: June 6, 2012
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Gothic Fairy Tales: Schneeweisschen und Rosenrotby ~Rosenbraut

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Fairy Tale: Schneeweisschen und Rosenrot / Snow-White and Rose-Red

Aderlass-Schneeweisschen: =Rosenbraut

Aderlass-Rosenrot: ~Herzensmelodie

Photographer: ~Lichi-Hikari

Dedication to: *AndySerrano

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Critique by ~alesaenz Jun 6, 2012, 3:13:17 PM

I like the picture, I really do, just there was something that worries me and I was analyzing for a while since Rosenbraut, the model, knows that my critiques specially on her artwork are the most sincere possible. After some minutes I got that the red rose of Red Rose wasn't visible due the angle of the shot and I feel a certain unbalance between the two characters. And I think that there is too much shadows on the models, on Herzensmelodie looks good actually, but on Rosenbraut, her face looks too dark and kills her skin tone. Also, those little house in one corner of the portrait seem odd, like out of place, maybe an editing could erase them since they don't add any benefit to the concept of the picture. And maybe not so much blue sky and be able to show a little more of the wonderful dresses. Or maybe a different angle where the chest area of the dresses could be more appreciated since due previous shots I know how spectacular dresses are. Again, sometime I feel like a villain due I am a huge fan of Rosenbraut's artwork, my best intentions always are to comment in a constructive and positive way.

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~alesaenz Jun 6, 2012

Lovely both!!!

~Rosenbraut Jun 6, 2012

Thanks! By the way, I thought about exactly the same points you mentioned negative. The flowr, the darkness and the house, lol. But I thought it's been artistic enough to share, so I did.

~alesaenz Jun 6, 2012

And also, in this way you can be sure that when I compliment an artwork of yours is not for just "being nice" but because I really do think that they deserve all the compliments